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Can You.....? by ~MiakaLee:iconMiakaLee:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Fixed


Can you see my love
Flying like a dove
Up so high
Glistening in the morning sky

Can you hear my love
In your ear a shove
My faithful heart is beating
With every beat, the affection repeating

Can you feel my love
That came from above
Ember in my heart still burning
I thank you for this, for I am still learning

Can you see my love
Is it that one you speak of
I am your dame
For my heart you took aim
©2005-2009 ~MiakaLee
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Author's Comments

This is my first deviation. Its very simple and thats about it.
Enjoy!

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:iconbabrus:
~Babrus Dec 14, 2005, 8:52:52 AM
beauriful beatiful wonderfull yay
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~Kittita Dec 14, 2005, 2:21:51 PM
It's so pretty. I love it! =)

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~jayfp09 Dec 15, 2005, 12:20:09 PM
Really beautiful..............It flows really well.

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~MiakaLee Dec 16, 2005, 5:13:25 PM
Babrus-:hug::glomp::hug::glomp: Thank you so much for the :+fav:

Kittita-Thanks:glomp:

jayfp09-Thank you:hug:

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When one has never touched love, never touched memories, or even warm blood, he cries out to the world for sympathy. When no one answers, he is left to die a shadow. Share your love - give hope to the darkness. ~Hikari
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~MiakaLee Dec 23, 2005, 2:11:10 PM
Thank you:blushes:

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When one has never touched love, never touched memories, or even warm blood, he cries out to the world for sympathy. When no one answers, he is left to die a shadow. Share your love - give hope to the darkness. ~Hikari
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~kwerfeldein Dec 29, 2005, 4:19:06 PM
great work...
are you christion ?
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~KaiStarr Dec 29, 2005, 4:42:46 PM
Very sweet sentiment. (^-^)

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~Myth87 Dec 29, 2005, 11:42:14 PM
Nice idea with the senses in every stanza! :clap:

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~Kei-th Dec 30, 2005, 12:44:07 AM
Really nice! I like the builig of this!

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